Apr 9, 2004 09:08 PM GMT

Chickenshit

Love it, need more, and greater effort on the part of the chicken when shitting like maybe dropping it on a line so that there is not just one winner, but two. If the shit is runny and maybe dropped on a corner where four are a winner it might even be more fun. Need nervous music when the chicken enters the saloon that gets better the closer to the table. Maybe a guitar drum roll as the chicken walks to the shitting spot and then dead silence so that the sound of real chickenshit can be heard. The only way one can say bingo is by a loud fart. Anyway, I like the story and would like to see more of it.

Pete

Editor's note: We don't have much sway over the chicken's behavior, but we do hope to have more Austin reports from R. Dutcher Stiles in the near future.